Star Wars IV: A New Hope - comments here please!

That's going to be hard to do in 500 words...

Ok, sorry for sounding like a dumby, but what was folio A?

I know. I've done this as an exercise myself and found I had to keep the language fairly simplistic (following the fairy tale tradition) to make it work. Whatever works for you. You might find, as I and many others have done, that you end up reworking this piece into a full story at a later date.

This is going make my brain hurt...

And Jack: Folio A was a creation story. Have a look at p.12 of the resource book for the folio pieces (top of the page). If you want to workshop your creation story you can do so over this forum in the next week.

Ok, thank you. I'll check it out.

The workshop offer goes for everyone, by the way. Just post them as a new topic and I'll read them (I'll send out a reminder email for everyone else to read them as well).

Okay, gang, our class time is just about up. Any questions before we go?

So when is the Folio A due?

So are we going to discuss how/what we're going to be writing?

It was due this week. As I didn't remind everyone though I am lenient on the due date. I'd rather you all had a chance to workshop if you need to. Once it's ready, please email it to me.

Ok. I'll try and post my creation myth tomorrow. Gotta type it up first; it's written, hard copy at the moment

Seona: re- how/what you're writing, not sure what you mean?

That's ok, I'm not sure either anymore. That thought has vanished from me.

Okay. If you have any questions, just text/email me about them. Same goes for everyone.

this sounds awesome. workshopping is good, do we have your email?? :S

Cool, thanks. I'll give mine another once over and send it in. Just needs another pass and to be typed up.

Yep - resource book again! Anyway it's editingteacher@gmail.com.

No problems Clare. Talk to you all next week.

Okay, folks, if no-one has any further questions I'll call class over. See you all next week!

wow, nice work swiping that gmail address!

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goodbye class! it was a pleasure, see everyone next week. Travis out.

Yes. It was an interesting class experience. See you all next time.